Logic good job man! Sorry it didn't turn out like you wanted but you should be proud of this! You can always do an alternate color on this to try again. But this is solid... Maybe simply putting the Spiderman logo and other cover elements will be enough to change your thoughts on this?
but have it in the right track! for me it was cool! i had no problem wht so ever in your work dude! still can't totally understand wht is still missing that making you uncomfortable in your piece. but for me honestly dude, the way you put yourself in right now. im totally flattered cuz you want to give your best for my work. dude, i salute you.