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Venom VS Spawn by logicfun Venom VS Spawn by logicfun
Pencil by :iconmarvelmania: [link]

Digital ink and color

WIP on my facebook [link]
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You've done an excellent job with your color choices here. The choice of green in your background really works to set them in an other-worldly place. The brush you used for it works, but I think with the way the characters are kind of flowing, having a bit more movement to your background would really compliment the action in the foreground.

Where I believe this falls short is in defining and separating the characters. I believe they're a little too similar in color to easily identify where one ends and the other begins. A quick adjustment to one of them to maybe add a little more blue would really help.

Your rim light works and helps to define the edges, but the interior portions of their forms need to be defined a little better. It took me a while to notice that Venom's thigh was outside of his arm and not the other way around. Some stronger highlights and a defining rim light over the top of his thigh where the light would be hitting it would really help.

You did and excellent job in lighting Spawn's cape here. Notice how you've got it brighter at the top where the lightsource is strongest? The same thing needs to happen for everything in the picture. The black areas of Spawn should appear brighter towards the top as he's closer to the lightsource. The same thing with Venom. The way you have it rendered now is very even and that's helping to contribute to the problem of not being able to define the forms. A little variation and some stronger highlights here and there will be a great difference maker.

Lastly, keep and eye on how dark you're making things. When it gets to the point where the lineart is difficult to see, you've gone too dark. That will be come a real issue when you work for something in print. Best to try to keep your ink limits under 240 as much as you can. This will keep everything easily readable.

Overall, this is very good work. A few tweaks here and there and this can turn into something really special. Keep it up!
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:iconsaucecaptain:
SauceCaptain Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
holy SHIT <3
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014
:)
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:iconnightphoenix2:
Nightphoenix2 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Nice, they're close enough to deliver the kiss of death. Really what its saying is, "I'm fearless, give me one good reason I should be afraid of you? I'll kick your...."
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
;)
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:iconnightphoenix2:
Nightphoenix2 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh yeah, that's right,....Venom did "Spawn" Carnage.
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:iconthepoweroflogic:
thepoweroflogic Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
I love you venom but this is not a place you want to be!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
;)
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:iconlye-chan:
lye-chan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing job ~GOD LOVE IT
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Thanks
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:iconstarkileromega:
StarkilerOmega Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
cool bro!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
:)
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:iconfireshockerbill:
FireshockerBill Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What both Spawn and Venom have in common beside wearing black symbiotic costumes, that they're both created by Todd McFarlane.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
:)
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:iconspillsin:
Spillsin Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My two all time favorite characters!!!!!!


So frickin bad ass <3
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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:icon8supergurl8:
8SuperGurl8 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would really love to see this happen.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
good fight
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:icongamma102:
gamma102 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Venom's gonna lose..
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Maybee ;)
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:iconknytcrawlr:
knytcrawlr Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
oh, this ass-whipping is going to be in-credible!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
:)
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:iconsteroids98:
Steroids98 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
SOOOO WICKED!!!!!! OH WOW!
FAVE! This is soo amazing! I had to go Favbutton!

SPAWN Tops! Venom eats dirt and gets a one
WAy ticket to HELL!!! :D GO Spawn go!!!!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
Thanks
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:iconsteroids98:
Steroids98 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You's Welcomes
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:iconconsolemaster001:
consolemaster001 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
RIP Venom lol :D
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
^^
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:iconstiv-o:
Stiv-O Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice one, great job!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Thanks
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:iconaaammmsterdddam:
aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
EPIC EPICNESS
Now, darth maul vs. venom? anyone?
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Thanks :)
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:iconaaammmsterdddam:
aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
So, no darth maul vs. venom?
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Ask to marvelmania,he is the penciler
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:iconaaammmsterdddam:
aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
ah thanks :squee:
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:iconjackegiacomo:
jackegiacomo Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
very cool :)
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Thanks
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:iconradja01:
radja01 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! :)
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Merci mec :)
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:iconradja01:
radja01 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
De rien, c'est largement merité! :)
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:iconzombiefighter116:
ZombieFighter116 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Any closer and they'll kiss lolz but great job nonetheless.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
lol
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:icontfsakon:
TFSakon Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Beautiful Venom, I do love a good venom :D
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Thanks
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:iconkkht311:
kkht311 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
So cool.

Fantastic artwork.

I LIKE!

:-)
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
Thanks
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:iconhphyde:
HPHyde Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MY TWO FAVOURITES GOING AT IT ONE ON ONE?! GOD HAS ANSWERED MY PRAYERS!!!!!!!
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:iconmarvelmania:
marvelmania Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
So Im God ;)
Aahahahaha
Glad u like it ;)
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:iconhphyde:
HPHyde Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes it's awesome! :D Hope to see more awesome stuff from you
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:iconmarvelmania:
marvelmania Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
for sure man ;)
Dont forget to comment as well ;)
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
;)
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:iconhphyde:
HPHyde Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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