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:iconlordofgazelles:
Seeing that the linework was handled by another artist, I'll keep this about the color and shading, even though I really enjoy the linework that I can see here. The colors are good, but it feels rather flat, some depth could be added with some variety and value in the background, the parts that are farther from us (the viewer) feel like they want to be darker than they are. Also it feels that the colors are just shaded flats, which isn't bad, but I think by using some differing hues you could achieve a more vibrant look to the whole image. That's about all I have on it, other than I think the leaves located in front of her hair, beneath the near arm (her left) stand out a bit too much? At first I mistook them for holes or separations within her hair, so maybe that could be corrected by darkening them up a bit. Hope this helps, I still really enjoy the piece!
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:iconislamkazama:
islamkazama Featured By Owner 8 hours ago  New Deviant Student Artist
awsome
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner 6 hours ago
Thanks
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:iconcomicface:
ComicFace Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Amazing piece,for me green is always a problem to color.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Thanks :)
For me, it's the white the more difficult
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:iconjustinjacques766:
justinjacques766 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Holy damn!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
:)
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:iconjoniigum:
joniigum Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
beautiful!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Thanks
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:iconjoniigum:
joniigum Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
:D

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:iconmaltron66:
maltron66 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Wonderful! Keep up the good work!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Thanks :)
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:iconkatsumiyo:
Katsumiyo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
I'm really liking your color choices on this one. Beautiful work!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Thanks
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:iconjuliusquasar:
juliusquasar Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
She looks hot, love the leaf "monokini"...
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
:)
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:iconjamilsc11:
JamilSC11 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice!!!!!! I love it
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Thanks
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:iconjamilsc11:
JamilSC11 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww u welcome! :)
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:iconsuez-h3:
Suez-H3 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
:) Very fantastic art :D
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Thanks
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:icongodofurging:
GodOfUrging Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Beautiful. Very well done.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
:)
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:iconthevocaloid1:
TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Beautyful and sexy :wow:
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:iconthevocaloid1:
TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Nothing to thanks
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:iconorabich:
orabich Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
great work!

:gallery: [link]

:points: [link]
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks :)
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:icongeorgina-ann:
georgina-ann Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
love it
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
:)
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:iconjwiest:
jwiest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Marvelously done!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous work! :aww:
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:iconsilvervulpine:
SilverVulpine Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome. :)
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:iconoo-monkey-oo:
oO-Monkey-Oo Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Fantastic work!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:icontswordz:
TswordZ Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Looks great! like a true comic. Like the colors.
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:iconcoolcatterri:
CoolcatTerri Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Very nice
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Hot
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
;)
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:iconartedigitalsa:
ArteDigitalSA Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
great job!!
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:iconlordofgazelles:
LordOfGazelles Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Seeing that the linework was handled by another artist, I'll keep this about the color and shading, even though I really enjoy the linework that I can see here. The colors are good, but it feels rather flat, some depth could be added with some variety and value in the background, the parts that are farther from us (the viewer) feel like they want to be darker than they are. Also it feels that the colors are just shaded flats, which isn't bad, but I think by using some differing hues you could achieve a more vibrant look to the whole image. That's about all I have on it, other than I think the leaves located in front of her hair, beneath the near arm (her left) stand out a bit too much? At first I mistook them for holes or separations within her hair, so maybe that could be corrected by darkening them up a bit. Hope this helps, I still really enjoy the piece!
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:iconlordofgazelles:
LordOfGazelles Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
whoops... didn't do the critiq thing right...
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
lol, no problemo ;)
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:icongeneralwolf17:
GeneralWolf17 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Amazing :)
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:iconlogicfun:
logicfun Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Thanks
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:icongleidsonaraujo:
gleidsonaraujo Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Awesome colors!
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